Friday, October 26, 2007

Traped in a Haunted House by Zach

There was a group of teenagers that wanted to go to a haunted house. When they got to the haunted house they got out of the car. Then someone jumped out from around the corner and scared them. Then they went to get the tickets to get in the haunted house. When they got into the haunted house a guy told them, "Please don't touch the props, play along with the actors, thanks have a nice time." When they got to the room they were walking through, someone jumped out and screamed at them. After they got to the last room the door was locked. They tried to leave. They noticed that there was no one around. One of the teenagers said, " Let's try the front door." They went back and tried the front door. It was locked too. They knew that they were locked in the haunted house. They tried every door and every window - all of them were locked. One of the teenagers noticed a sign that said that the haunted house is closed on Sundays. They came on Saturday night. They were locked in until Monday morning.

1 comment:

Senorita Jorge said...

Good organization. I liked that it had a clear beginning, middle, and ending. I especially liked the end was so clear.
~ Ms. George