Wednesday, October 31, 2007

Haunted House by Corey



In the middle of field there was a roofless house. The house had no roof and it was very dark inside. There were weeds that were surrounding the house. There was no paint on the house and there was nothing there besids the crows and the roofless house. The house looked like nobody has ever lived there for a long time. If any one ever did live there it must have been along time ago.

The Movie Day by Dulce


I went to the movies with my sister & my dad. It was an a Monday afternoon. We went to eat ice cream and we saw The Night at the Museum. It was so fun and I enjoyed it because it was the funniest movie I ever saw and I would see it again. I recommend it to anyone who loves to laugh. We ate a lot of candy and popcorn. I got sick of the popcorn and I haven't eaten popcorn since then.

Bob's Car by Zach

Bob's blue with white stripes Ford GT was a mess. It was rusty and had dents in the hood, on the doors, and on the roof. There was trash all over the back seat. There were stains on the passenger's seat. The back window was broken into millions of pieces. The passenger's window had rocks thrown through it. That is why Bob's car is a mess.

Shoes That Don't Fit by Zach

Genna's shoes did not seem to fit her. She had bright red shoes with white flowers. Her shoes were six sizes to big for her. When she put them on they looked like clown shoes. They were nice shoes but they were to big for Genna. That is why Genna's shoes seemed not to fit her.

Friday, October 26, 2007

Haunted House by Iyan & Marvin



The haunted house stood on a hill. At night the vampire bats came out of the house. The crows get the day. They rest on the caved in roof. The weeds coverd the pale house. It's always dark and cloudy. The house rots to the ground. It remains abandoned and it's scary surrondings keep it that way. It stays old and gray - haunted by the past.

Haunted House by Ramon



The prison had a horrible paint job, dead grass, and the trees had no leaves. The doors and windows had bars around them so people couldn't escape. The prison had huge walls with barbwire on top of the wall and tons of dead people inside. I could smell it. There was a creepy driveway and lots of stairs going up to the doorway. It looked as if there used to be gravel and half of the shingles were missing. There were a lot of spider webs in the windows. There were so many holes in the yard you couldn't walk through the lawn. There were a lot of rocks and trees.

Traped in a Haunted House by Zach

There was a group of teenagers that wanted to go to a haunted house. When they got to the haunted house they got out of the car. Then someone jumped out from around the corner and scared them. Then they went to get the tickets to get in the haunted house. When they got into the haunted house a guy told them, "Please don't touch the props, play along with the actors, thanks have a nice time." When they got to the room they were walking through, someone jumped out and screamed at them. After they got to the last room the door was locked. They tried to leave. They noticed that there was no one around. One of the teenagers said, " Let's try the front door." They went back and tried the front door. It was locked too. They knew that they were locked in the haunted house. They tried every door and every window - all of them were locked. One of the teenagers noticed a sign that said that the haunted house is closed on Sundays. They came on Saturday night. They were locked in until Monday morning.

Thursday, October 25, 2007

Haunted House by Dulce & Diana



The house stood on uneven ground. The dead plants and vines looked like they were swallowing the house. It looks like no one has lived in the house for a really long time. The haunted house felt scary with the creepy spider webs all over the place. It also looked like someone had died there and their ghost lived on. There isn't another house within a kilometer. It stood in the woods.

Haunted House by Randi



The old white was very tall and creppy looking. It had bars on the windows and door -maybe too keep something out or maybe in. There was a big wall right next to the long stairway that went up the house.

THE DARK HOUSE by Zach



The Dark House was dark. The old dark fence was rusty and spooky. The clouds looked like they came from a horror movie. The trees were dark, moldy, and looked like demons. The weeds looked as hands coming out of the ground. The lightening was as close as ever. Bats were falling from the sky. The house looked like some where Dracula would have lived, maybe an old man too. The house was tall, moldy, and spooky. The inside smelled like old men. The top had spikes that looked like they'd kill. That is why it is known as The Dark House.

Haunted House by Carolina



The house stood there silently in the woods. The ravens were waiting for someone to come. The sun hadn't hit the house for a long time. The plants stood there dying, wanting someone to come and help them. The rooms were completly full of darkness, no sign of light. There was no living thing there, only the birds.

Friday, October 19, 2007

Abandoned House by Ms. George


The abandoned house stood in the middle of an empty field. The only sign of life were the black ravens that circled the dark sky. Because the roof had completely collapsed, the stone chimney was the only structure sticking out from where the missing roof should have been. All the windows had been broken long ago, leaving dark holes instead of shiny glass. Fog rolled through the dying weeds that covered the ground, entered the window openings, and continued out the dilapidated structure.

Wednesday, October 17, 2007

My Favorite Place by Zach

My favorite place is my house for many reasons. One of the reasons is I get to sleep. The second reason is I get to play video games. I get to play any kind of game unless they are too violent. The third reason is I can talk to friends on the computer. I can send them e-mails on Hotmail. The fourth reason is I get to have a BBQ when my step-dad comes into town. He's gone most of the time because he is a truck-driver. When we have the BBQ my step-dad makes a really good sauce to put on the chicken, pork chops, bratwurst, and stake. The BBQ sauce tastes like BBQ sauce with a hot taste to it. He takes BBQ sauce and adds hot sauce to it. Then he puts the sauce on everything and puts it on the BBQ grill. The fifth reason is I get to watch TV. When I feel like watching something funny I watch Comedy Central. They have funny shows on this station. If I want to watch people doing something stupid I watch MTV2. They have a lot of shows that people do something stupid. This is why my house is my favorite place.

My Favorite Place by Dulce


My favorite place is at my dad's house. I like it because it's the best place to be in. It's very interesting because outside there are a lot of little bugs in his garden. There are ants and slugs. The yard also has a lot of trees. I love to climb the trees and get on the roof of my dad's house. At my dad's house I also play hide and seek with my cousins. Trees always make good hiding places. I love spending time with my family and my godmother Sofia.

The Pizza Didn't Look Good to Me by Iyan


The pizza didn't look good to me. The crust was dark brown. The cheese was a lime green. The pepperoni smelled bad, like rotten fish. It had mold all over it. There were dead bugs on it. It was moving too. It looked wet and worst of all, it had anchovy. They had salt everywhere. But I took a slice anyway.

About Me by Diana


I'm 14 years old. I was born October 22, 1992 in Orange County, Califonia. My parents lived in Santana, but there wasn't a hospital there so my mom had me in Orange. My mom said that I was born early. I was supposed to be born in December so when I was born I was little so I had to stay in the hospital for awhile. When I was 4 my mom and I went to Mexico to have my 5th birthday party over there. At my party I danced with my cousin. He is one year older. He is nice to me. Where my mom and I went it's called Cuaji short for Cuajiniculapa and where my grandma lives it's called Jalisco so my grandma and I had to take the bus to Jalisco. My mom came to Utah so I stayed with my grandma. It takes 2 or 3 days to get from Cuaji to Jalisco. When we got to Jalico we had to take another bus to get where my graendma lives and when we got there I met my grandpa. Well he is not my real grandpa because my real grandpa is not with my grandma anymore. Nobody knows were he is. I really want to meet him, but I don't know where he lives. Anyways I still call the man that's with my grandma, Grandpa. He is really nice.

Thursday, October 4, 2007

A Hunter Lost His Way by Zach


There was a hunter going to the woods in August to go deer hunting. When he got there he saw a deer and shot at it, he missed it. Then the deer took off. The hunter ran after the deer. The deer ran throw a field of roses. The hunter losted the deer. The hunter started to walk to the roses. Then the deer charged the hunter. The hunter shot at the deer and missed. Then he jumped out of the way of the deer. Then the hunter got up and started to follow the deer again. The sun started to go down. The hunter knew he needed to get back to his camp or he would be in trouble. He tried to figure out which way he came from. He started to go one way. Then he said to himself, "No, I need to go this way. But the deer went the other way. I can't follow the deer because I need to go to camp. I'll go this way." One hour later the hunter kept going in circles. He told himself, "I need to make camp here for the night." He looked for a place to make camp. While he was looking for a good spot to make camp, he found a cave. He stayed in the cave for the night. Then he came out because he heard something. There was a group of people looking for him. He was taken home.

The Way of the Samurai by Iyan


The way of the samurai is a long path. It is a balance of peace and violence. Sometimes it is deadly. If a samuria failed to complete his goal with his long sword, he'd use his short sword on himself. It was the only option to save his honor. Also if the shogun or emperor would sometimes ask samurai to commit suicide and the samuai wouldn't hesitate. One of the peaceful ways of the samurai was to write poems and draw paintings of nature. That is the way of the samurai.

Dogs Story by Dulce


It was a long time ago In Mexico. There lived two nice people named Tom & Sam. They were best friends and they were going to the park. They got lost on the way home. They slept in the park and found a group of puppies that looked like they been lost and now found. There were alot of homeless dogs. They saw had no food to eat. The dogs were hungry and wanted to eat. They were starved. Tom & Sam took them home and fed them nice food and gave them good lives. They lived so happy and they had children. Yea!!!!!!!!

Wednesday, October 3, 2007

The Fisherman by Diana

Romeo was a fisherman. He loved to fish. he went fishing every Saterday. One summer day he went fishing in the ocean. He was getting a lot of fish. He was happy that he was catching a lot of fish. He thought that if he went farther out in he ocean, he would get more fish. While he was fishing he thought that he had got a big fish, but it wasn't a fish. It was a shark! He tried getting the shark into the boat, but the shark wouldn't let him. Romeo pulled very hard , but so did the shark. suddenly the line broke. He looked for the shark, but he couldn't find it. A few minutes later the shark came back and started hitting the boat. Romeo tried to start his boat, but it wouldn't work. He was worried. He thought that he was going to die. He kept trying and trying until for 30 minutes. The boat finally started. He went home and told everyone what happend. thy were so happy that he was okay.

Messy Car by Carolina

Last week I went with my mom to go to the mall. We were getting in the car. My car is a silver Impala 2005 with silver rims. It was so messy from the inside out. There were lots of wrappers inside and clothes too so we decided to go to the car wash then to the mall. We got to the car wash. We started to clean the outside then the inside. Finally we were done cleaning the car. It was spotless. We got inside and off we went to the mall. We had so much fun cleaning the car and going to the mall. We bought some shoes in some stores, some clothes, and some delicious food.

Rocky Mountain Raceway by Corey

My family and I like to go to the Jet Cars Races on Saturday nights. When we get there we pay for everthing, get drinks, food, and earmuffs for my little brother. Every kid that goes there always wants to see the cars so we always go to the pits to see them. One saturday,my brother ran over to the cars and started looking at them. The show didn't start for another ten minuts so we have plenty of time. After we walk over to our seats and sat down. The lights go off and the cars line up to race. The jet cars have a twenty four foot flame that comes out at the back and they are the loudest and the fastest. Two or three cars raced and they anounced,"we are going to take a short break and then get right back to racing."

The races started again and we sat down. Right when they started my brother said he wanted candy and a drink. I said,"ok hurry Let's go get some". We got to the stand and it is a huge line. There was a man in the line that was complaining about his food that he got. They told him to sit down on the table and they would make another order of food for him. My mom called and asked if we were ok.I said "yea, we are,good". We got to the window and asked for a hotdog and a drink. They said",We dont have anymore hotdogs,But we have the drink. Would you like that?"I did. I'm glad that was over . The races where about to start."Remember how I said that the jet cars shoot out twenty four foot flames. Well there were people on the side and in the back of the cars to make sure that there is nothing wrong with the cars.

The lights went on for them to g, but there was still a girl back behind a car. The flame hit her and she flew back five to ten feet. Feet when the ambulance arrived all her skin was gone. They took her in the ambulance and went to the hospital. We stayed there for two more races and then we went home. Every time I go back to the races, I wonder what happened to her.