Wednesday, October 31, 2007

Bob's Car by Zach

Bob's blue with white stripes Ford GT was a mess. It was rusty and had dents in the hood, on the doors, and on the roof. There was trash all over the back seat. There were stains on the passenger's seat. The back window was broken into millions of pieces. The passenger's window had rocks thrown through it. That is why Bob's car is a mess.

3 comments:

Senorita Jorge said...

Good description. I liked the image of a rusty car with the window broken into a million pieces.
~ Ms. George

Anonymous said...

That would make me so mad
i do not no what i
would if someone did that
to my car.


Richie

Anonymous said...

man that sounds like a ugly car but funny at the same time

Evander B