Wednesday, October 3, 2007

The Fisherman by Diana

Romeo was a fisherman. He loved to fish. he went fishing every Saterday. One summer day he went fishing in the ocean. He was getting a lot of fish. He was happy that he was catching a lot of fish. He thought that if he went farther out in he ocean, he would get more fish. While he was fishing he thought that he had got a big fish, but it wasn't a fish. It was a shark! He tried getting the shark into the boat, but the shark wouldn't let him. Romeo pulled very hard , but so did the shark. suddenly the line broke. He looked for the shark, but he couldn't find it. A few minutes later the shark came back and started hitting the boat. Romeo tried to start his boat, but it wouldn't work. He was worried. He thought that he was going to die. He kept trying and trying until for 30 minutes. The boat finally started. He went home and told everyone what happend. thy were so happy that he was okay.

1 comment:

Senorita Jorge said...

Good story with a clear beginning and end. Next time try to add more detail. How big was the shark? What did it look like? You could even describe his pointy teeth.

~ Ms. George