The prison had a horrible paint job, dead grass, and the trees had no leaves. The doors and windows had bars around them so people couldn't escape. The prison had huge walls with barbwire on top of the wall and tons of dead people inside. I could smell it. There was a creepy driveway and lots of stairs going up to the doorway. It looked as if there used to be gravel and half of the shingles were missing. There were a lot of spider webs in the windows. There were so many holes in the yard you couldn't walk through the lawn. There were a lot of rocks and trees.
6 comments:
What happened to all the prisoners? Why were they left there to die and rot? Plus, what do dead smell like?
~ Ms. George
Hahahahha, what a funny story... I like it.
steven Johansen
i like the fact that you got into deateals about the house, and i like the barbwire, thats cool. and that the prisoners are gone.
jesse o
I liked your story ramon you added alot of details good job!!!!
***carolina***
I really liked your details! Great paragraph!!
Miss Cragun
Ramon, great job. You should post more things, you are a good writer, Maggie Cummings
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