The old white was very tall and creppy looking. It had bars on the windows and door -maybe too keep something out or maybe in. There was a big wall right next to the long stairway that went up the house.
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5 comments:
Are you kidding me that was way to short! But good details.
Zach
And WB
Zach & WB,
What details did you like? Plus, I agree. It was way too short.
~ Ms. George
We liked when you said that it had bars on the windows and on the door too keep something out or in. But maybe next time you should put more details.
-Dulce & Diana
i like your stroy because when you said there are bars on the windows to keep something in or out. It's a good story. Good Job!!! love ya
Miche
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