Thursday, October 25, 2007

Haunted House by Dulce & Diana



The house stood on uneven ground. The dead plants and vines looked like they were swallowing the house. It looks like no one has lived in the house for a really long time. The haunted house felt scary with the creepy spider webs all over the place. It also looked like someone had died there and their ghost lived on. There isn't another house within a kilometer. It stood in the woods.

2 comments:

Senorita Jorge said...

Good ideas and details. I liked the sentence about someone dying there and a ghost living on in the house.

I also liked that you wrote it was in the middle of no where with no houses with in a kilometer.

~ Ms. George

Anonymous said...

i like your story there is alot of detailed
corey