Friday, June 1, 2007

Two Tone Poem by Jared

I am the color of the dark gray
lonely night, silent and helpless,
sad and at the same time mad.

I am also blue like the empty ocean sea living
without color, empty without colors
that make me happy like a happy beach
reef, full of happy colorful fish and happy
all time

But dont worry about me because
some times I am fine

2 comments:

Senorita Jorge said...

Good word choice. Dark gray does remind me of a lonely night and a beach reel full of colorful fish would make me happy.
~ Ms. George

Anonymous said...

You did really good on your poem Jared. That's how I feel sometimes. You are really good at writing poems. You did a wonderful job on your poems.




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