There was a very old old haunted house. It was way back in a dark forest.This house was so old that there were vines swallowing the house. The paint was coming off. The roof was dark like the pits of hell. Inside the house the wood was as dark as night. There were spider webs everywhere, to many to count. When you walked up the stairs they would creek and it sounded like they said, "Get out or die." They were also very loud. Some of the time it looked like someone was looking out the window like a white cat staring at you like it is going to kill you. That is kinda scary. There are ghosts everywhere. That is our haunted house.
4 comments:
Good descriptions. I liked that the roof was dark like the pits of hell. I also liked that the stairs creeked like they said, "Get out or die." Nice similies.
That was relly good i like scary storys but i dont like to write them i like to tell them or people telling them to me.
KRISTELL
this house reminds me my uncles house it is really scary
Wow, your story gave me the chills. Your imagery is awesome! You do a great job describing the scene. Well done!
Mrs. Heath
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